Your first review and stint as a film critic - well done on getting it out there. It's obvious you've worked hard to maintain an objective tone (no first person etc.) but there's a few improvements to be made in your next review - You need to look again at the Harvard Method for referencing your published sources - you have no bracketed citations after your quotes, which means your reader doesn't know who said what or when. Likewise, you need to look again at the appropriate way to name and reference illustrations (i.e. Fig 1), and in general terms, just take another look at what the brief tells you to include in your reviews (i.e. film poster, 3 stills etc.). Onwards and upwards, Anass! :)
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ReplyDeleteYour first review and stint as a film critic - well done on getting it out there. It's obvious you've worked hard to maintain an objective tone (no first person etc.) but there's a few improvements to be made in your next review - You need to look again at the Harvard Method for referencing your published sources - you have no bracketed citations after your quotes, which means your reader doesn't know who said what or when. Likewise, you need to look again at the appropriate way to name and reference illustrations (i.e. Fig 1), and in general terms, just take another look at what the brief tells you to include in your reviews (i.e. film poster, 3 stills etc.). Onwards and upwards, Anass! :)