Good to see you diversifying in terms of methods for visualising your spaces. I still think you might need to think a bit more 'theatrically' about creating your spaces - i.e. loosening up a bit, because it looks to me as if you're worrying a bit about perspective etc. and perhaps not thinking expansively enough about these spaces; yes, your interiors are enclosed and 'inside', but I want you to get a bit of space and depth and layering into your thumbnails. I've shown this animation to Katy - who is also doing the Magic Shop and The Red Room - because it creates its spaces in a much more illustrative way - less detail, more atmosphere: check out this adaptation of Poe's The Tell-Tale Heart - and pay particular attention to use of silhouettes and foreground elements to create a sense of layers and space:
Hey Anass :)
ReplyDeleteGood to see you diversifying in terms of methods for visualising your spaces. I still think you might need to think a bit more 'theatrically' about creating your spaces - i.e. loosening up a bit, because it looks to me as if you're worrying a bit about perspective etc. and perhaps not thinking expansively enough about these spaces; yes, your interiors are enclosed and 'inside', but I want you to get a bit of space and depth and layering into your thumbnails. I've shown this animation to Katy - who is also doing the Magic Shop and The Red Room - because it creates its spaces in a much more illustrative way - less detail, more atmosphere: check out this adaptation of Poe's The Tell-Tale Heart - and pay particular attention to use of silhouettes and foreground elements to create a sense of layers and space:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W4s9V8aQu4c